Tuesday, September 20, 2011

Blog Seven: Best Icons Work

Elements that I enjoyed in other students' projects were short stories or anecdotes that set up the rest of the story, but were not necessarily a focus or discussed the whole time.
In Adrian Gonzalez's Anonymous piece, part of his intro was "... as a child I thought I could actually be the 10,000th visitor on that website and win $1,000,000", which is something everyone can understand, since everybody has seen those ads online.
In Danielle Weiss' piece I Am Jewish, she discusses her continuum and how she is proud of her family's history and heritage very well, from her Grandparents' lives during the Holocaust, to her trip to Israel. This detail for the continuum is something I would have liked to do better in my own piece.

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